In today's situation, spending government funds in arts, music and painting is widely criticize due to the fact that there are many social and economic issues that needed to addressed first. This essay will highlight why Government should maintain or reduce their investment and prioritize funds to other projects that have greater importance.
Some people argue that investment in arts, music and painting is relevant as they are part of the tradition and rich culture of a society that distinguish them and set them apart from the others. It is something embedded in the society's history and has to be preserved and is equally important as any project that requires government funding. These factors strengthen their position to push the government to maintain their investment in arts, music and painting.
On the other hand, government should prioritize funding key projects for social development, education improvements and infrastructures that are beneficial and have greater impact on the society. Investments on these have proven to alleviate social inequalities as it creates more opportunities. Social development such as housing projects and skills training for less fortunate people will help them boost their confidence and in turn they contribute to the betterment of the society. Improving the education system will produce more highly competitive citizens that have the capabilities to drive the economy higher.
In conclusion, government should reduce their investments in arts, music and painting as it is something that is unnecessary especially now that we are facing various social and economic problems.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'criticized'.
Suggestion: criticized
...s in arts, music and painting is widely criticize due to the fact that there are many soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.548 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92744530265 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.3163226468 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.7 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316370872848 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129945045547 0.0925447433944 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109152413699 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229918995046 0.151781067708 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995666968784 0.0609392437508 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'criticized'.
Suggestion: criticized
...s in arts, music and painting is widely criticize due to the fact that there are many soc...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.548 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92744530265 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.3163226468 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.7 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316370872848 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129945045547 0.0925447433944 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109152413699 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229918995046 0.151781067708 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995666968784 0.0609392437508 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.