The internet has a bigger impact on people's lives because it is more popular than televesion.
Do you agree or disagree?Use specific reason and examples to support you position
Nowadays we live in twenty-first century it includes: high technology, television
and internet. Therefore twenty-first century is technology century. It helped people
to make easier their work. In this century television also popular Some people think
internet has a bigger impact on people’s live because it is useful than television.
I tend to agree with that in this essay I will explain reasons for my view.
Firstly, social networks can include television functions. As an example television is
only for watching. Todays we can watch any things on our phones. It is also one pros.
Internet play big role than television. Next if people are not able to watch their favourite
things they can watch on the phone. Such as if they stay a long time in queue they may
watch it and by the help of it they can kill time.
Secondly, television set cost’s so expensive instead of it we can buy quality phones because
phones can do the same things with television set. For example nowadays television cost
about 2 millions cost of phones 1 million. If we buy phone we can save our money and
it means it is good for financially.
Some people think however social network can not do television’s function. In their opinion
watching films on television set is enjoyable than watching on phone. It may give good mood
and they may gather with their relatives and friends.
To sum up, I tent to agree internet has a bigger impact on people’s live because it is good
financially and we are able to watch our favourite things. For example during the work
we can listen music and watch films. Therefore todays internet play big role in our life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89824561404 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62925277306 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498245614035 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2022340046 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4761904762 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164196813831 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540871121242 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766549361442 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662548680173 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101534209338 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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