THE MOEVMENT OF PEOPLE FROM AGRICULTURAL AREAS TO WORK IN CITIES CAN CAUSE SERIOUS PROBLEMS IN BOTH PLACES. WHAT ARE THE SERIOUS PROBLEMS AND WHAT MEASURES CAN BE TAKEN TO SOLVE THESE PROBLEMS?
It is true that migration of people from rural areas to urban area is leading to many problems for both. The following paragraphs are going to explain about the cons of this trend as well as the solutions to tackle with them.
This migration is disadvantageous for cities in many ways and the first one is inflation. For example, the high demand of living in city is responsible for the rise in the prices of rental apartments and to buy a property which has increased almost by 5% between last 1 years. Secondly, it is reducing the employment chances for the local people as the more population increases also inclines the number of candidates for job search in the city. On the other side, it is equally unfortunate for rural areas as well. The primary effect is on the farming as there are few people left in the villages who are willing to continue farming as their carrier which is directly affecting the scarcity of food. Apart from this, it is also having an adverse effect on the lives of poor people living in those rural lands because their livelihood is dependent on agricultural or other rural activities somehow. For instance, in Punjab, state of India, most of the lower grade people work in the harvest seasons to fulfil the needs of their own and family.
The main idea to solve this issue to some extent is to provide those people with all the amenities which are the reasons of this phenomenon, such as, better transportation system so that they can travel to their job destination easily , opening some hospital or reliable education system. If these things are easily available to them then they might not feel the need to move to another city for their regular needs.
In conclusion, I reiterate that this trend of people moving from less developed territory to towns is giving birth to so many another difficulties for both sides but it could be improved for fulfilling the requirements of countryside people who might be moving to cities just for their daily needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55740892141 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0850924585 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.75 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136205977226 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518415051366 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565451976062 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936828307163 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352571007738 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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