Reduce crime
Day by day, the rate of crime in the world is increasing rapidly and there are many different opinions on the best way to reduce crime. The argument that we need to attack the causes of crime such as poverty and lack of education opportunities is the best way to decrease the number of crime. Analysing both sides of this argument will be analysed before a conclusion is given.
Firstly, the most people think that the reason to commit crime is poverty. They need money to sustain their lives. Example of those offences are such as thieves, robbing, grabbing and kill for money. They do that think because they don’t have enough money to sustain their lives and their family. If only they had a job to earn money, I am sure they would not go to the extent to hurt the others to get money. Apart from that, by providing each citizen the opportunities in education, everyone will be educated. As a result, they will be rational and self sufficient enough to not commit crime.
In addition, increasing the number of police on the street is not sufficient. They must be patrol more frequently than they are now. Consequently, people will not be bold enough to commit crime as they know they will be caught and punished. In my opinion, if everything is carried out consistently with a lot of effort put into it, certainly the aim of diminishing the number of crimes can be achieved.
In conclusion, I am in favour that crime can be reduced by dealing with its causes, particularly poverty and lack of education opportunity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, so, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65185185185 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60303716246 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544444444444 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3301616658 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256635534064 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878396791017 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115019090908 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190563711106 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113488343357 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.