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The bar chart compares the proportion of British citizens' preferences with four types of accommodation at London, Oxford and Cambridge in the UK, in 2005.
Overall, it is clear that people in London like to live in flat houses most, while detached and semi-detached houses are more popular for the citizens of Oxford and Cambrigde.
Looking at the chart in more detail, the percentage of people choosing flats was the highest in London with 58 percent, more than other types of houses. Semi-detached and terraced houses were about 15% and 17%. And the detached houses were the lowest about 9 percent. By contrast, Cambridge was popular for detached houses of about 35%, in comparison, semi-detached houses about 26 percent, flats of 20% and terraced houses of 18%.
Nevertheless, citizens from Oxford prefenced in most types of housing, except terraced houses is the lowest of 19%. Flats were most likely with 29 percent, semi-detached houses about 26%, and finally, detached houses with 24 percent.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, look, nevertheless, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95705521472 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64646961492 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466257668712 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 163.0 22.4926829268 725% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 808.0 112.824112599 716% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 163.0 22.9334400587 711% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 38.0 5.23603664747 726% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 83.4 13.2329268293 630% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -85.51 61.2550243902 -140% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 65.7 10.3012195122 638% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.63 8.06136585366 181% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.4329268293 481% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 67.2 10.9970731707 611% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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