Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men and even though in many developed countries is more than 50% female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these position to women.
Occupation now has been imcremental recently but almost executive-level roles are still undertaken by men even though half of the workforce is women in many developed nations. There are a lot of various arguments about this problem. In my opinion, I completely agree that the businesses should assign an approriate proportion of these positions to women.
Nowadays, the productivity of the companies is not related to the gender. Not at all, everyone is provided equal opportunities to contribute to their job. But now is changed, many employers think that the men can solve the work quickly and accurately more than women. It maybe true for some kinds of works. For example,the electric mechanic and engineer, high-level positions should be allocated to men because they have enough strength and skill invole with machine and electricity. But if the jobs are related to economics, teaching, desgin. I suppose that the women can make it plausibly by their patience and carefulness and also accelerate the productivity of work or any project the did.
On the other hand, women like Mary Barra- the CEO of GM, Abigail Johnson-The CEO of Fidelity Investments are one of the most typical characters about women which allocated vital positions in some vogorous business. In addition, if the companies do not balance the proportion of men and women in executive-level positions. They can be unfair to those people have hands-on experience in the work or talented one. As a result, the talented staffs are not interested in dedicating to the company. Everyone do not deserve to be discriminated by their gender.
In conclusion, the businesses should divide the high-level positions for the one which are well-qualified, have outstanding talents and experiences and have no discrimination to women.
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- Most high level positions in companies are filled by men and even though in many developed countries is more than 50 female Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these position to women 73
- Most high level positions in companies are filled by men and even though in many developed countries is more than 50 female Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these position to women 73
- Most high level positions in companies are filled by men and even though in many developed countries is more than 50 female Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these position to women 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'trues'?
Suggestion: trues
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, well, for example, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23611111111 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09989919191 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0342435325 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309279682906 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777019686942 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705648850282 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175379432719 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291212321851 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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