Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific solutions proposed
According to the lecture,there are three points brought up by a woman to against the reading passage.
For the fist option which is to direct removal of salt from the lake's water in special desalination facilities. The women believes that this kind of movement may contribute to the over salty condition of he inland lake but as well will bring other problems.For instance, after pumping the water and heating the water ,chemical elements will be left behind which consists of poisoned factors, carried by the wind to the air ,and when people breath,these factors can cause damages to our health.
And to fight against the second point, the woman suggests that using the ocean which is 20 percent less salty than water in the lake to dilute the salt level needed pine canals,due to the long distance between the lake and the ocean ,a huge construction is asked,meantime the government can`t supply enough free sources to build it,so,the solution is not realistic.
For the last point,dividing the lake into several sections and building constructing walls to control the lake's salinity.The woman said that,the lake is situated in an area where intense activities happen a lot.An earthquake will break down all of those constructing walls so that even if the waters are divided into different sections,they may be mixed up together in the end.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , there
According to the lecture,there are three points brought up by a woman ...
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...cial desalination facilities. The women believes that this kind of movement may contribu...
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...e but as well will bring other problems.For instance, after pumping the water and h...
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... pumping the water and heating the water ,chemical elements will be left behind wh...
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... factors, carried by the wind to the air ,and when people breath,these factors can...
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... wind to the air ,and when people breath,these factors can cause damages to our health...
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...dilute the salt level needed pine canals,due to the long distance between the lake a...
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... distance between the lake and the ocean ,a huge construction is asked,meantime th...
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... the ocean ,a huge construction is asked,meantime the government can't supply enough...
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...t supply enough free sources to build it,so,the solution is not realistic. For the...
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...on is not realistic. For the last point,dividing the lake into several sections and buil...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lakes'' or 'lake's'?
Suggestion: lakes'; lake's
...lding constructing walls to control the lakes salinity.The woman said that,the lake i...
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...ing walls to control the lakes salinity.The woman said that,the lake is situated in...
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...l the lakes salinity.The woman said that,the lake is situated in an area where inten...
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...a where intense activities happen a lot.An earthquake will break down all of those...
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Suggestion: , they
...ters are divided into different sections,they may be mixed up together in the end.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, well, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 223.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05829596413 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79074404552 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654708520179 0.540411800872 121% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 21.2450331126 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.357092745 49.2860985944 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 225.6 110.228320801 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.6 21.698381199 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06452816374 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 4.19205298013 382% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0596406626608 0.272083759551 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308507513979 0.0996497079465 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0188589500525 0.0662205650399 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0377740405817 0.162205337803 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134122053249 0.0443174109184 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 13.3589403974 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 53.8541721854 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.0289183223 175% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.42419426049 118% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.498013245 187% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.2008830022 179% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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