Creating an appealing image has become more important in contemporary society then it's the reality or truth behind that image.
I agree that creating an appealing image has become more important in the contemporary society, especially with the advanced technology, social media allows us to show more about ourselves. However, I think that the truth and reality is equally important as it is the human natures to learn about the reality and truth, that is why there are research on different aspects. Moreover, the truth is always affecting the image, that it is hard to pretend or give a good image all the time without an appealing truth and reality.
With social media, people are more likely to show themselves to the public by posting photos of oneself and their life. The photos we chose is the way that we want how others to perceive us. For example, we might create an image of a very kind and loving personality by posting photos of volunteering events. And the captions that we type with a bunch of loving words also gives a good impression to others. Since social media is all around us and it is even used for mate matching or job seeking, creating an appealing image is a must.
However, it is the human nature to know about the truth, and when the truth and reality is different with what they see, people will definitely speak up. With the Facebook company where an employee was suicide because of the high work pressure and being unfairly treated because of his visa status, people were protesting outside Facebook with the quote that the Facebook CEO once said about good working environment within Facebook in order to keep their employees working in the company and not leaving. This is very ironic when it comes to the truth that Facebook is not a company that you can enjoy the gym and other facilities within the office, but a place to capture the employees and work within Facebook day and night.
It is very important that the truth and reality is what affecting the image, no matter it is about a company or a person. Although it is easy to build a wonderful and appealing image towards the public, people know about the truth and reality. And with the power of the social media, this is what can wreck someone or a company campaign which they have been working for since then.
In conclusion, it is important to create an appealing image in the contemporary society, while the truth behind should be what it drives to our appealing image otherwise this is what can wreck the one’s reputation in just one day.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-01-24 | candicesum | 66 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 428.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68224299065 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40918555473 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453271028037 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0063346922 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.6 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5333333333 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334971737683 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116372223802 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098331475231 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209044516012 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130804926841 0.0667264976115 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.