Communalism

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Communalism

The rising trend of communalism and the accompanying violence have created a feeling of insecurity among the religious minorities. Muslims, Sikhs and Christians in particular, fear discrimination and confrontation in the days to come. This may just be a fear, but the nation cannot afford to let about one-fifth of the country’s population to fall victim to panic, suspicion and insecurity. The events between 1984 and 1999 in Kashmir, Punjab, Uttar Pradesh, Bihar, Gujarat, Assam, Orissa, Andhra Pradesh and Delhi give ample evidence and taste of the destructive outcome of the communal virus in its varied forms.

Religious minorities in India are pro­tected by the Constitution which provides for justice, tolerance, equality and freedom. But in an age in which religious fundamentalism is getting transferred into religious bigotry, intolerance and narrow-mindedness, the notion of ‘Ram Rajya’, is not infrequently misinterpreted by the mi­norities, especially Muslims, to mean the rule of Lord Ram, i.e., Hindu rule. The presence of police in and near religious shrines to keep an eye on and check the hide-outs of terrorists (as in Amritsar in 1985 and in Kashmir in November 1993 and May 1995) is viewed as interference in re­ligious faith.

Therefore, to prevent damage to the peace and integrity of the nation, there is need to analyse and debate the problem of communal­ism and communal violence. It has become absolutely important to define ‘communalism’. Also, it is equally pertinent to discover who is ‘commu­nal’.

Communalism is an ideology which states that society is divided into re­ligious communities whose interests differ and are at times even opposed to each other. The antagonism practised by the people of one community against the people of other community and religion can be termed ‘communalism’. This antagonism goes to the extent of falsely accusing, harm­ing, and deliberately insulting a particular community and extends to looting, burning down the homes and shops of the helpless and the weak, dishonouring women, and even killing persons. ‘Communal persons’ are those who practise politics through religion.

Among leaders, those relig­ious leaders are ‘communal’ who run their religious communities like business enterprises and institutions and raise the cries of “Hinduism, Is­lam, Sikhism or Christianity in danger”, the moment they find that donations into their holy ‘corporations’ have begun to dwindle, or their leadership has come to be challenged, or their ideology has been ques­tioned.

Thus, ‘communal’ is not one who is ‘a man of religion’ but ‘one who practices politics by linking it with religion’. These power politicians are not good Hindus nor Good Muslims, Sikhs, Christians, Parsis or Bud­dhists. They can be viewed as dangerous political ‘scum’. For them, God and religion are merely instruments to be used to live luxuriously as the ‘king parasites’ of society and to attain political goals.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.0 314% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 35.0 6.8 515% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 33.7804878049 207% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2656.0 965.302439024 275% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 459.0 196.424390244 234% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78649237473 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 3.73543355544 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.8500128695 2.65546596893 145% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 106.607317073 256% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59477124183 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 828.0 283.868780488 292% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.482926829268 1449% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.7234276801 43.030603864 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.789473684 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1578947368 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84210526316 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 1.13902439024 966% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0987955839107 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466577237455 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100361602228 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761112084599 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881323753274 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 61.2550243902 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 11.4140731707 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.06136585366 130% => OK
difficult_words: 164.0 40.7170731707 403% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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