Istanbul Promo plus

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Istanbul Promo plus

This line graph illustrates the amount of Istanbul promo plus in millions of Turkish lira during the period of 12 months in 2007.Overall, it can clearly be identified that the biggest sales of promo plus was in March over the period of 2007.

Looking at the first 2 months, the number of sales started at 200 millions Turkish lira. Then, it grew slightly to just under 250 millions Turkish lira. The period between February and March, saw the biggest rise in selling which peaked at 350 millions Turkish lira. This was followed by a significant decrease of 230 millions lira over the next four months from March to July. After that, this figure returned back to increase in August by 230 millions lira. Later, in August the prizes of sales of Istanbul promo plus plummeted to just over 120 millions lira before fluctuating over the last 4 months to finished at 190 in December.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Overall
... during the period of 12 months in 2007.Overall, it can clearly be identified that the ...
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Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
... March to July. After that, this figure returned back to increase in August by 230 millions l...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...n August by 230 millions lira. Later, in August the prizes of sales of Istanbul p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73376623377 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37226376098 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551948051948 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9059758645 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196698162195 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877526826401 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141046981162 0.0843802449381 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223147016294 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131423768947 0.0819641961636 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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