Some people think that children’s free time must include educational activities otherwise they will waste their time.
What is your opinion?
many individuals believe that educational activities must be included by children's free time , in contrast, their time will be wasted . In my opinion , i totally agree with point that infant should have much educational activities .
To begin with , what happened to children if their time without educational activities ? to be honest, there are many negative for children without school activities in their leisure time . Fristly , it is obviously that without extracurricular activities will make children to become more and more lazy and passive . In addition , being slothful and passive for children will make them to rely on their parent and they will lack of independent and discipline when having to face to their life and happiness. if we dont encourage them to participate to school's leisure or extracurricular , they will be passived and derelict , dangerously, they will be more and more lean on us. it can be seen that having more and more children always stay in home and less go out and it just plays game , listen to music or browse facebook ..... that is all which they can do in all 1 day or even 1 week in these days
Second of all, beside that things, we should encourage our kisd to take part in extracurricular in school or event in their leisure time. Since then , they can become independant , discipline and less depend on their parent., Moreover, when they are become a mature or a adolescent going out in the world and they must face to their life and social that they also have brave and life skill enough to deal with their trouble and problem . So, in my opinion, for parents like us always to be with our children and talk them through problem about activities in school or extracurricular . i make sure that one will make distance between parents and children to shorter and understand each other better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, so, then, in addition, in contrast, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 6.8 368% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 5.60731707317 749% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 965.302439024 157% => OK
No of words: 312.0 196.424390244 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72205561605 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 106.607317073 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503205128205 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 283.868780488 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5564336591 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 1.69756097561 1649% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339134427194 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148811455391 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118004252203 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279997866453 0.15604864568 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968218172126 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.