about me

Essay topics:

about me

I am a well organised person and I have developed specific skills in planning through my experiences in the managerment, doissier, concept design, technical design and master plan. I’m a hard worker who loves to be and architects. Every preject is an opportunity to challenge myself. And there is no better way than working in a small group, 5-6 peoples, sharing ideas and contributing each of us our knowledge to get the best result.
At present, I have been working for PPd firm. PPd established by Mr. Phillippe Pierga who has experience about hospitality design.
I was studied a lot when I have the experience for work with Philippe at both Mauritius and Viet Nam PPd Office.

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2021-02-21 vishal sachdeva 81 view
2019-05-12 nptk 11 view
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 571.0 937.175257732 61% => OK
No of words: 117.0 206.0 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88034188034 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28886816799 3.78020617076 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89891044848 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.760683760684 0.622605031667 122% => OK
syllable_count: 171.9 290.88556701 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7990464945 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5714285714 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0371165623031 0.216113520407 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0191121561352 0.0766984524023 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468150304156 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0311317921375 0.12726935374 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440270026619 0.0580467560999 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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