Dear Liz, How is it going on? Ithink you are happy to live there with your family.I am writing this letter regarding a part time job as well as my studies. Actually I joined a computer course in country's university and also Iwant to do part time job

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Dear Liz,

How is it going on? Ithink you are happy to live there with your family.I am writing this letter regarding a part time job as well as my studies. Actually I joined a computer course in country's university and also Iwant to do part time job there, so I want to take help from you to find a job for me.

I passed my graducation from the punjab university with high percentage. After this I had passed computer diploma from a goverment computer center. Along with these things I have two year experience from public school.According to me all these studies are well sufucent to take any part time job in your city.

You know,I am not belong with a very rivh family and father also have not too much monet to pay all expenses as well as my studies, so i decided to do part time job, with the help of this job I earn some for my tution fee and my accomodation charges.

You live there from five year and I think it is not difficult tast for you to search a part time job for me .It could be very convient for me, when I will reach there.

I hope, you would try to help me.

with best wishes,

Taran.

Dear Liz,

How is it going on? Ithink you are happy to live there with your family.I am writing this letter regarding a part time job as well as my studies. Actually I joined a computer course in country's university and also Iwant to do part time job there, so I want to take help from you to find a job for me.

I passed my graducation from the punjab university with high percentage. After this I had passed computer diploma from a goverment computer center. Along with these things I have two year experience from public school.According to me all these studies are well sufucent to take any part time job in your city.

You know,I am not belong with a very rivh family and father also have not too much monet to pay all expenses as well as my studies, so i decided to do part time job, with the help of this job I earn some for my tution fee and my accomodation charges.

You live there from five year and I think it is not difficult tast for you to search a part time job for me .It could be very convient for me, when I will reach there.

I hope, you would try to help me.

with best wishes,

Taran.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Liz, How is it going on? Ithink you are happy...
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...re happy to live there with your family.I am writing this letter regarding a part...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
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Suggestion: part-time
...ly.I am writing this letter regarding a part time job as well as my studies. Actually I j...
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Suggestion: part-time
...ountrys university and also Iwant to do part time job there, so I want to take help from ...
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...ake help from you to find a job for me. I passed my graducation from the punjab ...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...punjab university with high percentage. After this I had passed computer diploma from...
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Suggestion: According
... two year experience from public school.According to me all these studies are well sufuce...
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Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
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... two year experience from public school.According to me all these studies are well sufucent to ...
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Suggestion: part-time
...e studies are well sufucent to take any part time job in your city. You know,I am ...
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... well sufucent to take any part time job in your city. You know,I am not be...
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...t time job in your city. You know,I am not belong with a very rivh family a...
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Suggestion: belonged
... in your city. You know,I am not belong with a very rivh family and father also...
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... all expenses as well as my studies, so i decided to do part time job, with the h...
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... well as my studies, so i decided to do part time job, with the help of this job I earn s...
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... not difficult tast for you to search a part time job for me .It could be very convient f...
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...for you to search a part time job for me .It could be very convient for me, when I...
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...r you to search a part time job for me .It could be very convient for me, when I w...
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...I hope, you would try to help me. with best wishes, Taran.
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... try to help me. with best wishes, Taran.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, regarding, so, well, i think, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29302325581 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31005983033 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553488372093 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.808308961 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.553645418015 0.216113520407 256% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214127306487 0.0766984524023 279% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188739038444 0.0603063233224 313% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287853339036 0.12726935374 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.258557221237 0.0580467560999 445% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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