Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, Teenage years are becoming quite challenging for most children and future generations. Adding to this, the great variation between ways, that they have been emerged currently, pairing themselves with their mates which might be conflicting and causing struggle. Also, dealing with rival pressure, fearing of academic and social failure, and trying to cope with overwhelming stress.
The question raising here is; whether our teenage years have been the best time periods of our life with all its whites and darks or the adult life is the best among, and in order to answer this substantial matter, we got to disclose all the aspects of each one.
Starting with the teenager’s life, which is considered as the most preferable time periods for most of us, where life is out of responsibilities and charges. As, all what could matter since then is, how we can spend more time outside the bed, gaming, gathering with colleagues for an outing, claiming illness in order to skip a school day, or even complaining of mother’s food. For example, when I was a kid, I used to act asleep, in order not to get enforced to drink milk daily as it was my everyday struggle, as my mother has always been able to discover my artifice, claiming that I will be a great actress in the future.
On the other hand, adult life is completely irrelevant to the previous stage, where mindset becomes more open to the other world, accepting new concepts and getting attached to new challenges. Moreover, the ability of distinguishing and analyzing our own issues and trying to figure them out, without seeking anyone’s assistance, which is certainly entitled “the peak of matureness”. Also, being capable of constructing a family, raising kids and above all, securing a permanent bread-winning sector.
Collectively, we could never neglect the fact that mature life is amazing and full of magnificent memories that is hardly erased or replaced, but adult life is as more of great interest as juniors’ life, except for it is an extent for how much we can bear and fight solemnly.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, except for, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.48453608247 267% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 5.05154639175 337% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 937.175257732 188% => OK
No of words: 348.0 206.0 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06609195402 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88326379879 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 127.690721649 168% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614942528736 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 290.88556701 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0270984134 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.272727273 76.5299724578 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 31.6363636364 16.8248392259 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148156557667 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572210605348 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049323237537 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814751233638 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229954254673 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 8.37731958763 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 41.2886597938 230% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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