Write a letter to your neighbor about the damage that occurred to your car while he was parking his car in the lane outside your home.
In the letter, you should:
describe the damage
say how you feel about this problem
suggest to him what actions he should take.
Dear sir,
I am writing to regret closing leisure central as that would have a negative impact on individuals.
My friends and I used to visit central regularly to practice some sports such as basketball, tennis and running. Also, some events have been held for youth that encourages creative works like reading, poetry sessions, painting and drawing classes, and music concerts.
Therefore, the center has offered plenty of significant values to local people of different ages. Even the elderly had built suitable groups for them to exploit their time successfully together. Moreover, local families have organized many activities at the weekends such as dinner parties.
The absence of a central's role will create a huge gap between the residents in multiple ways. For example, teenagers would not acquire more effective skills as previous, and their leisure time is a vital issue that should be tackled by your authority.
I am looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Heba Muhammad
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-11-26 | heba muhammad | 78 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 18, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'centrals'' or 'central's'?
Suggestion: centrals'; central's
...s dinner parties. The absence of a centrals role will create a huge gap between the...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50625 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63805533253 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75625 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5717979341 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0702367329815 0.216113520407 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031005386124 0.0766984524023 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440252637749 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0359206852965 0.12726935374 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369528879032 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 8.71597938144 165% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.