You are temporarily moving to a new city for your job. You will be
there for three months, and you would like to rent some
accommodation for your stay. Write to an accommodation rental
office. In your letter
Tell them how long you are staying
Describe the type of accommodation you would like
Explain what facilities you will need nearby
Dear Sir/Madam,
I will be moving to Carrick for three months with a short term placement for
my job, and am looking for a suitable place to rent for the period.
Ideally, I am looking for something with easy access to the motorways as I will
be spending a great deal of time travelling to nearby cities. I am not
particularly concerned with the particulars of the house itself as I will only
need a bedroom and bathroom, and don't anticipate spending much time in
the kitchen.
I will, however, need internet access as I will be working at home on my
computer and will need to be in touch with my head office throughout my
stay.
I will also need to be within a reasonable distance from a shopping area,
although it will only be for the essentials like bread and milk.
If you have anything you feel may be suitable, then I would be very interested
to hear from you.
With regards,
P Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...a short term placement for my job, and am looking for a suitable place to rent fo...
^^
Line 9, column 34, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... only need a bedroom and bathroom, and dont anticipate spending much time in the k...
^^^^
Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... my head office throughout my stay. I will also need to be within a reasonabl...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59036144578 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58637967998 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584337349398 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.5457915535 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.857142857 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212055329983 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956273966352 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860825918363 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792964089548 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736447559629 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.