Some people say that in order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing.Others say that other factor are more important.
Do you think that people people can only happy if they have a job they really enjoy?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people say that you need to have a desirable job so that you can feel happy while others believe there are a numerous different factors that can bring happy to you. In my view, a decent job that you really love doing can make the myriad benefits to both financial and spiritual values.
There are several reasons why i believe having a stable and preferable can make you cheerful. First job can make sure that you can improve your living standard. Nowadays, almost every aspects of life involves money: from the basic things such as health care services, transportation, food to the advance stuffs like travel, technology-things that will make your life better but if you don’t have a job that you love doing, you will not be able to make money to guarantee these things.
In the spiritual term, when you work with your passion, your strength, you will be more productive and use your enthusiastic to develop the career, that can bring countless benefits to both you and your company. You will have more motivated to stand up and correct every mistakes after each failures, You will dedicate the best things that you have for your job and always satisfy with it. That can lead to reducing the stress and make your life expectancy longer. Moreover the favourite job can help we connect with the people who share the same values and improving our social network can help us live happier and more valuable.
To conclude, we only live once, so find out the dejob that can make you happy, and dedicate the best stuffs that you have for it. You will feel your life more precious.
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Suggestion:
... You will feel your life more precious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, really, so, thus, while, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66428571429 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32750852165 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532142857143 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8710415228 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.727272727 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414350700103 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178938569342 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919647669543 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287718765653 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094416641756 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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