The damage to the environment is increasing at an alarming rate due to human activities. What are some of the ways in which humans are damaging to the environment?
In this day and age, the environment is being absurdly afflicted by human activities at an increasingly rapid pace. This essay aims to examine some detriments of this phenomenon.
The overexploitation of natural resources to meet the burgeoning demand of society has put a heavy toll on the environment. Deforestation, for example, has constituted the depletion of natural habitats of wild animals, and therefore, pushed them to the verge of extinction. Moreover, by cutting down trees, farmers and manufacturers are exerting impacts on the eco-system, and, consequently, inflicting imbalances in food chains due to the demises of certain species owing to human activities.
Another thorny side of the modern world that leads to environmental degradation is the dearth of consciousness when it comes to dealing with discharged substances. For instance, a staggering number of vehicles engaging in bumper-to-bumper traffic, are exhausting escalating doses of fumes, which, in turn, hover over and around metropolises and cause the greenhouse effect. Another example of this case is the release of toxic wastes from factories. Undoubtedly, those chemical substances are deleterious for the life cycle of animals inhabiting rivers, as well as for marine life. However, there are pollutants that are caused by chance rather than humans' faults, such as oil spills stemming from the collisions between large-sized ships and icebergs.
To recapitulate, human activities have exerted detrimental effects on the environment in many formats, a propaganda campaign to raise environment-consciousness is necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71966527197 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52320634735 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690376569038 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3734940012 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.272727273 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192028100032 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624127039645 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946795622922 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130019250445 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089240722154 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.89 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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