An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors, nurses, and teachers are leaving their own countries to work in develop countries.
What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with the situation?
More and more educated and skilled individuals, like healthcare workers and educators to name a few, emigrate to develop countries for employment and improvement of their quality of life. This movement resulted in economic and social difficulties in the their home country. Despite of this, there are various ways to stop this phenomenon.
To begin with, the migration of professionals, predominantly from developing nations to develop country, has greatly deterred the economic progress of their homeland. This is because there is a shortage of experienced labor force that will work in the various income generating industries in the home country. In addition, there is also a loss of revenue due to this movement because there are less tax payers in the country. Furthermore, another problem that can arise from immigration is social problem particularly for their children. This is because young individuals growing up without the presence of parents will lack guidance and discipline that is enforced at home. These leads to behavioral problems and some children are even involve in gangs and petty crimes. According to a study in juvenile delinquency, a significant number of these children were brought up by a single parent or were had absentee parents, due to overseas employment, since childhood.
Nevertheless, there are ways for the government to stop the brain drain or the departure of highly skilled workers to a foreign country. First, there should be an increase in the monetary compensation and additional incentives for these professionals. This is because this will allow them to improve their standard of living and provide a comfortable life for their family, since these are the primary reasons as to why these people are driven to leave their country. Furthermore, another means of preventing these workers from migrating is for the government and institutions to enhance working facilities and open more job opportunities in there home countries. Through this professionals do not need to be separated from their families and thereby can guide their children in their formative years. In a survey conducted among overseas workers, majority of them would consider returning home if they are given local opportunities to practice their professions.
In conclusion, there are negative effects of the migration of skilled professionals in the country’s economy and society. This is evident in the slow progress of the national economy due to lack of human resource and the effect to the family. However, there are ways to reverse the relocation these individuals by offering a higher salary and a better chance of domestic employment.
- An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors, nurses, and teachers are leaving their own countries to work in develop countries.What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with the situation? 73
- An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors, nurses, and teachers are leaving their own countries to work in develop countries.What problems do this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with the . situation? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'involved'.
Suggestion: involved
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, as to, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2252.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3619047619 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00343340943 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519047619048 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.0 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6548760958 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.526315789 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1052631579 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178267065476 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543149585384 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400421927146 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101372743801 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430284132341 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.