Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The dynamics of media have changed rampantly over the years. The media coverage directly proportionates the individual life. Many people assert that media coverage of celebrities is having a false effect on children. In my perception, it is a true fact and same will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

To begin with, from past few decades it has been seen that media industry is growing at wild pace . The sheen of stars and glitterings of limelight change the attitude of an individual. The celebrities live larger than life and henceforth, their stories and controversies attract the c...

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Sentence: The media coverage directly proportionates the individual life.
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Sentence: The sheen of stars and glitterings of limelight change the attitude of an individual.
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Sentence: First and the foremost, indulging in a bad activities such as drinking, smoking , consumption of drugs , using faux language etcetera.
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Sentence: Moving further, the stars are in limited relationship these days and the casanova image attracts the individual immensely.
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