In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is is a positive or negative development?
There is a fact that in the contemporary world , with internet-connected devices people are able to do their shopping , work and communicate without direct communication. The aim of this essay is to address why I utterly concur that this trend is negative advancement in the long run.
Indisputably,the popularity of interacting with other people on social platforms such as Facebook , Instagram has increased a higher risk of personal information insecurity from cyber criminals on those sites .To elaborate , many users are lured into accessing bogus websites requiring their private information due to clicking links sent by online criminals A possible outcome of this phenomenon is that they may suffer from the possibility of fraud and property deprivation.
Given the proliferation of technology , workers and students can partake in remote working or distance learning , however this trend will give rise to several serious problems.For instance , employees who work at home can be easily distracted from the task at hand by other factors such as household noises , other family member , and thus they cannot give out the best deliverables for their companies.Besides , distance learning also deter students from communicating with their friends in a face-to-face environment.Therefore , it is truly difficult to cement their relationships with other students , they may soon feel isolated from their peers in the long run.
Furthermore , virtual shopping has become prevalent in the modern world ; however, consumers may suffer from the risk of purchasing counterfeit or low-quality products.To explain , the intriguing advertisements with conspicuous graphics for a wide range merchandise from daily staples to luxurious items impulse people to buy them.Besides , comparing to the offline shopping , they also do not have a chance to examine qualities of the products rigorously or test it to make sure that it satisfy their need. For example , when consumers buy an item of clothing , they have to try on it to know ưhether it is suitable or not to avoid wasting money on useless things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47368421053 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30352424842 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622291021672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 211.306780666 49.4020404114 428% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 294.666666667 106.682146367 276% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.8333333333 20.7667163134 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.8333333333 7.06120827912 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224791556989 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106871312826 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925674709307 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132738860895 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564171985365 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.3 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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