The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem

It is irrefutable that this contemporary world gives best employment opportunities to the city dwellers. Thus, majority of people are migrating toward the metropolitan. This increasing urbanisation could produce problems in both areas. However, various precautionary steps to cope-up with this situation. Both the aspects are elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs.
out of all the difficulties several could be more harmful to the affected areas than other. The principle one is that inflation would possible in some fundamental field of society. By this I mean that not only citified regions will become congestive, but more villages left with only few people to deal with farming. Farmers are only the people who produce the raw materials for the giant outlets. In brief, due to lack of public in farming field, cost of daily needs such as grocery, cloths, grains, beans, fruits and vegetables will be increased. Moreover, in the urban area developed infrastructure will needed to compete with the requirements of residents. To elaborate, Some regions of city are become a concrete jungle due to expansion of existing sectors like medical, education, transportation, employment and entertainment.
Nonetheless, variety of possible solutions could be attributed to address this occurrence. The most significant one is that authority should give equal job opportunities to resident of both the province. Nowadays government spends more budget on the urban areas and overlook the countryside to cope-up with this industrial era. But, gradually they should start increasing the amount of revenue toward developing rural areas. One recent survey carrie out by the Times Of India concluded that by producing special economy zone in suburb area individual have not only stopped to moving urban areas but 23% reverse migration toward village has noticed. Encouragment of farmer by giving subsidies on behalf of purchase of upgraded farming equipments, crop-failure and medical insurances, latest irrigation system and education to their descendents would be a wise advise to the center.
To conclude, both rural as well as urban sides are in a critical state due to urbanisation as it creats a high cost of basic emenities; although, cognitive attempts of legislation and citizen could resolve it.

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Average: 7.7 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, so, thus, well, i mean, in brief, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64661654135 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05596321767 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1451090989 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142232969332 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441420300584 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380324329123 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653921412141 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552884938295 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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