The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem

Nowadays, the migration count of pupil form rural to urban cities has been increase immensely. Although some believe it is and productive step towards the improvement in lifestyle of an villager. But some group of people think, this could cause some detrimental problems in both the areas. However, I agree to this thought of citizens in the country. Further, in this essay I may highlight some of the majors actions that could help overcoming such issues.

To begin with, there are some of the dis-advantages regarding the pupil's moving to cities could cause. Firstly, if farmers move, it could effect the output of major source in food supply. Meanwhile, the environment in cities is may bring health issue to newly moved farmers. Secondly, the sudden change in area of employments can make it hard to survive. Also, the cost of living and purchasing a house , which is commonly higher, compared in rural areas. For Instance, my maternal uncle's friend who has recently moved with his family, in our one of the rowhouse, in the view of getting a luxurious life has been constantly failed in his motive of migration and had been facing great financial loss.

The coin always has two sides, it is impossible to, not finding aa appropriate quick fix for aforementioned instances. One of the obvious solution is to have to proper plan of process. However, instead of moving with whole family my uncle's friend would have been the first to come and understand the herculean task after being hear. Moreover, the other solution, the government should have clear propaganda to increase the population which could indirectly be in positive side of growing economy. For example, the municipal corporations in various cities can implement right to have a accurate income sources and a well natured infrastructure.

To conclude, I firmly disagree, the trend to migration in could outweighs its demerits over its merits. And people can also have stable life in agriculture areas too, with the view of growing demands of grains supply in country. And should focus on improving the already had facilities which can prove the misconception of urban areas having better opportunities than where they have been from years.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06849315068 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71401021988 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3480500226 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3684210526 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134228005839 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381415271098 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495741847363 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785244735384 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333340724017 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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