Polygamy has lead to massive divorce rate around the globe.give its reasons nd solutions?
With the steady growth in globalization, Polygamy are the men who do more than one marriages.Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever.For instance, the given topic asserts that is polygamy one of the reason behind inclined divorce rate in the society? Through this essay,I shall explore its causes and possible measures and shape up conclusion by the end.
The first step is to understand why is this happening?Broadly speaking ,there are two main causes for this.The first and foremost reason to support my point of view is that due to lack of problem in one guy there thoughts are never matched with each other.So,that conflicts as well as distances surged between them,also misunderstanding created in couple.At the end of this situation both take decision to get divorce from each other.Apart from it, in some cultures the law made by regime that owing to less population man can do more than one marriages.The best epitome would be in Pakistan, boy can do more marriages.
There is also certainly no one solution to this problem after given the complexity of its causes.However, family should not pressurized to their children as boy and girl have equal rights that they can take their own decisions. That is why , no conflicts made between any person and they can survive happy life and rate of divorced also increased leap and bound.At last but not least, authority should implement some strict law regarding this problem. SO,that no one think about more marriages.For instance,if boy do more marriages then he would send into jail or pay high charges.
In a conclusion, there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worse.while it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this, this could probably be solved by government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, well, while, apart from, broadly speaking, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0298013245 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.009220582 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605960264901 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.960256218 49.4020404114 326% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.0 106.682146367 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.1428571429 20.7667163134 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.7142857143 7.06120827912 279% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111553888441 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545866212664 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416859883558 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732630838339 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480278417562 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.0946893788 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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