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In recent years, the scientific developments in farming became an important tool and indispensable in human’s life . it has changed the way people access to living and made everything useful and convenient . Personally, I support the view that the technical growth in farming has both disadvantages and advantages .I will explain about my opinion in this essay
From ancient times, agriculture has played a vital role during many decades and the human always want to make the quanlity of farming greater . There are many methods of scentific farming , they are growing crops in greenhouse , improvement in farming mechanization , On the one hand, they would create several benefits for crops and vegetation such as : improving the soil fertility , killing harmful pests . Moreover, technology can protect the crops from the bad weather and falling temperatures , whereby the crops are increase the productivity rapidly .
On the other hand , they also have weak point in this problem . If the farmers and households do not have enough income , they can not use technical devices to cover their farming needs .But in addition , scientific farming methods also replace labours and many people might lack their jobs . Insecticide is a result of scientific discovery that leads to food poisoning and water pollution . hence , every citizen may die because of cancer .
In conclusion, I believe that the scientific cultivation method is a great invention that advances our life better, it also has drawback for our ecosystem . The human should solve the problems and consider carefully for the best solution
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36653386454 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85043826419 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657370517928 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.4000426422 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.454545455 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163743711346 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680507818329 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939358477991 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1064415263 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656026460668 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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