Social media impact on relationship
It is generally argued that social media has a vital impact on people networking. Personally, I in every respect agree with this for the rationale that follows.
To begin with, It is a fact beyond dispute that social media is one of the tools which you could use to establish the relationship. By this, I mean that people use facebook, instagram, twitter,etc. to making friends and widening their networks. A recently conducted study has shown that around seven-in-ten Americans use social media to connect with one another and this number would be increased day by day. Consequently, it is possible to see that people tend to depend on this platform.
Another point is that there is no gainsaying that social media become the thing that could obtain the fame. In other words, we can use this to get more attractions from other person. A study which has been carried out lately has revealed that Donald Trump had win the presidential elections by using twitter for electoral campaign in 2017. Accordingly, It can be inferred that sometimes social media not only for creating relationship but also build a strong influence by brand-lover.
To conclude then, whilst the exit contrasting stances on the matter, it is taxing work to determine which maybe more positive. Howbeit, in view of aforementioned arguments, my unshakable conviction is that social media is on of the essential things related to our relationship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
... people use facebook, instagram, twitter,etc. to making friends and widening their n...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'won'.
Suggestion: won
...tely has revealed that Donald Trump had win the presidential elections by using twi...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'won'.
Suggestion: won
...tely has revealed that Donald Trump had win the presidential elections by using twi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, may, so, then, i mean, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05531914894 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87167525789 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608510638298 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7280834926 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3846153846 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344176902425 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111878391112 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131978358269 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201338140097 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245611200967 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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