In Some Areas Of The US Teenagers Are Not Allowed To Be Out Of Doors After a Particular Time At Night
Some people opine that young people should not stay outside alone after a certain time at mid night. I completely support this idea because of the safety issue of teenagers.
To embark upon, it is not safe for children to staying outside for longer periods at midnight due to sharp increase on city crime. And in most cases young people are often victimized by criminals and goons as it is easier for criminals to drag young people into crime world. Thus, it is visible that the risk of getting attacked by criminals is higher when young stars are roaming outside late at midnight without being guarded by the elders. Apart from that, pedophiles are most active at midnight is the other cause teens should not leave home alone late at midnight. Therefore, staying outside late at midnight alone might expose the teens to get attacked by criminals and pedophiles.
Furthermore,under aged people are the easiest target by human traffickers. traffickers tend to attack young girls and children as they are more vulnerable than other age groups. So policy implementation by government such as "curfew" is required to encourage young people to stay in home at late midnight.
In conclusion, the teens should stay at their home during late at midnight to avoid being exposed by criminals and traffickers. And if it’s necessary to go out, they should be guarded by any adult family members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, apart from, in conclusion, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74600168231 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559829059829 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7352313052 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.5833333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132493115271 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538701723982 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058089734969 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983773093468 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567825432321 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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