Some people consider computer to be more of hindrance than a help. Other believe that they have greatly increased human potential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people insist that computers have more negative impacts than benefits, but there might be an argument that some people think that computers can increase progressions of human abilities due to its usefulness. I personally agree with the first group; the second idea is still right in some extent.
Some people believe computers are hindrance and they are not so useful as we are thinking for several reasons. Firstly, a deteriorate productivity is the serious problem, workers cannot concentrate on their work due to social media and other entertaining contents. For example, they play game, listen to music, use social network and so on while working, which will lead to the delay in their work and the worst situation is they are not be able to do their job and become unemployment. Secondly, the data theft increasing dramatically in daily life. For example, if we visit a website with no security or copy from the unknown USB, computers or phone could be hack and it is inevitable that all personal information, bank account and so on will be definitely loss, and virus is also the concern because they may eradicate all the work immediately.
In fact, computers have a crowd of benefits. First of all, people do their job, get information from other people easier and faster than the past. For example, the word processing software and emails are very useful when you want to type, fix texts or communicate with other people in distance place. Secondly, computers help us to save physical space such as paper materials. Because all data are stored in a hard drive and it also very convenient when you want to find the documents.
To conclude, I would like to say that, every technology has both advantages and disadvantages sides. It depends on the individuals whether the use of computers would be positive or negative.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... thinking for several reasons. Firstly, a deteriorate productivity is the serious problem, wo...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...and the worst situation is they are not be able to do their job and become unemplo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92903225806 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70572099793 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1455899422 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.142857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269439241944 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851862831668 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764873329064 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151903023297 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663177434975 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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