Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be.
One of the biggest problems in many parts of the world today is that of unhealthy lifestyles and the effects that unhealthy lifestyles have on people and society. It is not an issue for a personal issue of anyone but rather a social and medical one.
For a lot of people, it is easy to develop an unhealthy lifestyle. They spend most of their time sitting at desks at work, starting a sedentary working life. In fact, this has become increasingly true of people over time, because jobs that used to involve physical movement have been replaced by computer-assisted jobs.
Another reason is that a growing number of people use their cars for every single journey instead of walking sometimes. Doing very little exercise like this way only brings in a poor health condition. And many people, in particular young people, spend a lot of their free time sitting down and looking at computer screens,doing nothing meaningful but watching movies or playing computer games all the time instead of going out and doing sport and taking exercise. Food is another issue because nowadays young people seem to enjoy junk food, which offers them little nutritional value.
People are very aware of this problem and they want to keep fit and stay in shape. In most places, it is not difficult to do this successfully. There are gyms, fitness centers where people can join, and plenty of individuals are doing this. In additional, there is abundant information about what to eat, and it is by no means expensive to feed ourselves with healthy food. The whole subject gets a lot of publicity on the media and consequently many people find it both enjoyable and affordable to stay healthy.
In conclusion, it is easy for a lot of people to have unhealthy lifestyles and this can cause medical problems because they can eventually require some medical treatment, which is even costlier than shopping for healthy and organic foods. On the other hand, it is not at all impractical for people to avoid these problems by submerging in regular physical activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , doing
...ing down and looking at computer screens,doing nothing meaningful but watching movies ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89655172414 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64804736402 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6961623454 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275719748041 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889067988487 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632563131493 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153006308751 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601507993955 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.