some people think that government should provide subsidies to the farmers for cheap and healthy food .others think that government should tax companies producing unhealthy food. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Subsidies are oftenly provided by the government to an individual,businesses and institutions to bolster the welfare of society.some masses assert that to upsurge the production of food to make it affordable and healthy governer authorities should confer the subsidies to the farmers; however others ponder that tax can be imposed on the coporate sectors who are making unhealthy food items.
Commencing with some points to endorse to former view ,production of healthy food can be encouraged if the authorities provide financial assistance to the farmers in the form of subsidy .to demonstrate, owing to the high prices of farming equipments ,seeds and machines in some territories , masses are unable to afford quality products to enhance their production. Therefore, subsidies has to be given to farmers to upgrade the standards of food items. Further more , unethical practices followed by the farmers to make both ends meets can be restricted by providing them monetary endorsement . To be specific the pupils who grow crops add divergent kind of pesticides, fertilizers to manage the towering expenses of farming.Needless to say ,by providing subsidies farming is like to be less expensive which means hygienic food can be available at low cost. Thus, financial support should be given to the crop growers .
Throwing lights on the latter view . To embark with, companies having money spinning approach also produce unhealthy food . Therefore, taxes should be impose to restrain this happening . Companies , for instance, use chemicals, food preservatives, colouring flavours in order to make them delicious and long lasting . Besides this , even after using the cheap material ,they sell them at high price . What is more , company believe in curtailing the quality when the product become well known . Moreover, this happening can not be controlled unless government impose taxes on companies . Hence , it is extremely imperative to set taxes .
To recapitulate, undeniably, I don’t prefer one on the other as both the sides are equally imperative. Although, authorities give subsidies to farmers so that farming become less expensive and they produce the food which is affordable as well as healthy;however, taxes are also put on the companies to stop the manufacturing of unhealthy food .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, kind of, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44101123596 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1377441588 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567415730337 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.996220275 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 121.0625 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332953199744 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997306007508 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664313355424 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213219387732 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388365751202 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.