Some people think that schools should involve students in school management. Do you agree or disagree with this idea? Give reasons for your answer.
Irrefutably, managing something is not a cup of tea for everyone however, the general consensus is that schools should indulge students in school management. I am largely in the favor of this notion and this essay intends to look into some lucrative and devastating effects of above approach.
Abundant of positive results of involving learners into the councils of school can be mentioned but the predominant merit is that children can become more responsible by taking decisions for school. For illustration, according to recent survey conducted by Tokyo zenith school, more than 75% of students are capable to take decisions in their life without the indulgence of any other person owing to they play role in the management of school.
Furthermore, the interference of students in social events also increase by being the member of school's administration because they get innumerable chances to participate in social functions and they also share their standpoints in front of public, which assist them to become a socialized person.
On contrary, the study of students effects in negative manners if, they join the school management because they have to miss many essential classes of study. To cite an example, the result of British London School Of English shows that the academic performance of students who are the members of school's authority have 13% lower grades than rest of the learners.
In the final reckoning, i tend to reiterate that although, being the part of school management committee, students have some bad effects on their academic grades yet, it not only gives chance to become more creative and socialized but also provide chance to learn other skills, which are vital to become an active member of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22340425532 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75578462072 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570921985816 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0776058888 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.125 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.25 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241908260581 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116694654867 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566689517341 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137308658254 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065847511574 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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