Some people think students should learn more practical courses like computer, but others think they should learn more about theoretical courses like geography and mathematic
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it is thought by some people that students should learn more practical courses such as computer. While, others believe that they should study theoretical courses like geography and mathematics .This essay intends to discuss both views and i will conclude with my opinion
on the one hand, some masses believe that students should prefer practical courses .because nowadays, employers hire those employees who have practical knowledge .such as ,in each and every field computer is compulsary to store data and companies hire those candidates who have vast knowledge and are able to operate computer at higher level.Moreover, people think that if students learn pratical courses then they will never forget their skills as well as with the help of computer people can complete their work fastly.
on the other hand, some folks think that students should learn theoretical courses, because subjects like mathematics are essential to calculate everything .For example, people purchase various things from the market and they have to count money ,so theoretical subjects are important .In addition to it, learning theoretical subjects help to know about the history by which person can enhance their knowledge such as , if people can learn geography then they become aware of weather conditions. companies hire those who are intelligent in such courses
To conclude ,I opine that learning all subjects are essential to become perfect in each and every field and it also helps to increase job opportunities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37552742616 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5825950768 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 236.360952782 49.4020404114 478% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 318.5 106.682146367 299% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.25 20.7667163134 285% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.75 7.06120827912 379% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427079838866 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.281212733436 0.084324248473 333% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142037811756 0.0667982634062 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26247019009 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177959151957 0.056905535591 313% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.5 13.0946893788 256% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 50.2224549098 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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