Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think
that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give
your opinion
The problem of noise pollution is currently increasing in modern society. While some
individuals believe the levels of noise being created should be strictly controlled, I would
argue that people should have the right to produce noise if they want to.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why the government should control the
amount of noise produced. The first reason is that too much noise can significantly
affect people's health. Living in a place that is too noisy can cause problems such as
headaches, which can decrease the health levels of people, especially old ones.
Additionally, noise can disturb people's work or study. For example, a university student
will not be able to concentrate on his preparation for exams if his neighbours keep
singing too loud.
On the other hand, I believe people can make as much noise as they want because of
some reasons. Firstly, producing noise is sometimes considered a type of recreational
activities. For instance, singing or cheering for a football club can be relaxing, and
everyone has the right to do those things. Secondly, as the world is becoming more
modern, people have found ways to deal with the problem of noise. For instance,
scientists have invented walls and windows that can block out the noise, which allows
individuals to focus on their work without being disturbed. Therefore, the problem of
noise can be reduced and there is no need for people to keep quiet.
In conclusion, while there are reasons why the levels of noise should be limited, I
believe people should have the right to make noise
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06037735849 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60491088096 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539622641509 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1016637334 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264244211452 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101553100465 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104435249062 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893139853936 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763646191499 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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