Some people think that these should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much as they want. Discuss both views and your opinion
There is a discussion ongoing these days regarding controlling about noise. while some people believe that make racket as much as they like. although I know the reason why some individual think so, i would still argue that had better manage sound.
On the one hand, many people want to have freedom to create sound for various reasons. Firstly, they feel comfortable when making noise from different activities while working or entertaining. For example, some others extremely keen on listening to music whereas they prepare their meal in spite of disturbing the next – door neighbors. In addition, some people always consider as noise as a part of the life which can not avoid. The sound from traffics and machines. they become more and more familiar to people on the developed process. As the result, they think not necessary to control noise.
On the other hand, it seems to me need reduce sounds to have a better life. To start with, it’s very essential for each individual a quite space to work or study especially which jobs need to highly concentrate on them. For instance, while you were analyzing data, another song was played make you neglect. In addition, some people need silent to have a rest especially patients, babies. The time when they sleep them stronger or grow up.
In conclusion, it seems to me noise should be limited in order to have a better life although many people could make some noise as much as they want without people around.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, so, still, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88492063492 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41315197804 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6226001773 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9375 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362247763441 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112621525348 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932304663612 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235824763291 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946899244525 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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