Some people think women should be given equal chance to work and excel in their career other believe that women's role should be limited to taking care of house and children . To what extent do agree
While some people think that society should allow women to do jobs , other think that they ought to only a part of domestic work .I agree with the former view and this essay will discuss why I think so The people who think that women should stay at home think so for women.
The people who think that women should stay at home, think so for several reasons. The main reason is increasing crime in society, especially on women. Because women's families want to keep them safe, they do not send them out of homes to keep them safe. Apart from this, in some cultures, when women go to jobs, it is considered as a taboo. Due to their orthodox thinking, people still believe that women are not suitable for jobs. For instance in many backward areas, women still work only as housewives.
However , I believe that there are certain reasons why women should be given equal chance to do work . Since it is right to women to select any career , it is mostly and illegally wrong to deny them from this right . people should not stop them form choosing their career . Along with this as women contribute equal in every field as well. because in present they are do anything for shine their name . Such as Kalpana Chawla was first women in India who reached on moon .this is biggest proud for country as well as for all women's .
To conclude, although women's face the problem if orthodox thinking ,yet ,u believe that if they get chance , do anything for nation in any field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, well, while, apart from, as for, for instance, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55471698113 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06503561784 2.80592935109 74% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550943396226 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3551825993 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2142857143 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376741946864 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140371098771 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988978384227 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241248097635 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677617067553 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.