Today more and more young people are opting to marry after 30 what in your opinion is the right age for marriage after thirty or before thirty?discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Marriage is an indispensable part of every person's life. A handful of masses opine that after 30 is the accurate age for marriage while other people believe that before thirty is the right age for marriage ceremony. I will discuss both views along with my standpoint in subsequent paragraphs
To commence with, some people says that after thirty is the right age for marriage because in that age individuals become mature and also become able to take responsibilities of marriage life. In the age of after 30 individuals boon certain experiences of their life and able to handle various vissitudes of their life. For instance, research evident that 66%people have good married life who were married after the age of 30. So, thirty plus age is the appropriate age for marriage
While,oppenents ponder that before thirty is the right age for marriage because in that age chances of health related complications like hormonal changes, infertility and many more are reduced. For instance,research evident that 62% individuals who were married before the age of thirty is rarely suffered from the problem of infertility. Therefore, marriage before the age of thirty lessen the chances of infertility.
In order to describe my perspectives, i would like to stress upon the fact that marriage prier to age thirty is right age because after thirty, individual can not able to get the real pleasure of marriage life because of work stress .along with this they also get some health complications like hormonal changes, infertility and many more.
In a nutshell,it can be said that both views have different opinion and neither can be stated wrong but my viewpoint has more significant worth for me.
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- Today more and more young people are opting to marry after 30 what in your opinion is the right age for marriage after thirty or before thirty discuss both these views and give your own opinion 77
- Today more and more young people are opting to marry after 30 what in your opinion is the right age for marriage after thirty or before thirty?discuss both these views and give your own opinion 60
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also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86324348691 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.9096578724 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379970605043 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16704538348 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778293485239 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215113694973 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662219852933 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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