Studying at public school or private school has always been one of the top debated issues. In this essay, I will present major advantages and disadvantages of choosing public schools to study.
To begin with, studying in public schools has many benefits about kids’ academic knowledge and costs. Firstly, children can acquire high-quality academic knowledge. That is because teachers in public schools tend to concentrate on learning from books and understanding the information. In addition, teachers also give their students homework and advise them to review the lessons after each period. Secondly, choosing public schools is economical. Meanwhile, the schools’ facilities are sometimes not as good as the private schools’ ones. Therefore, studying at schools with better facilities is quite worth considering.
When it comes to the drawbacks, going to public schools has some minuses about kids’ health and teachers’ care. On the one hand, publics schools focus on the knowledge from the books and usually have heavy curriculums. That makes students’ mental health get worse because of enduring great pressure. On the other hand, there are a lot of members in a class in public schools. This causes the problem that teachers cannot have equal attention to everyone in the classroom and students may easily lose focus. Because of that, students get bad many results every year, while private schools can help students learn English well. In other words, students who choose private schools to study have a good environment to practice the language and have bigger chances to study abroad. For that reason, people should carefully consider choosing schools which have better environment.
To conclude, whether studying in public schools is good or not depends on the demands and conditions of each family. In my opinion, the merits seem to outweigh the demerits because the above reasons.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Ho Hoai Phuong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3779264214 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6430378223 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571906354515 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7364336527 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.6315789474 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476457635235 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17018396212 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136679456964 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333463067335 0.151304729494 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117703205549 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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