It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best for both for the individual and for society.
Do you agree or disagree?
Encouraging people to get married before 30 is said to be best for the individual and society sometimes.
I totally agree with the this. Let me elaborate. Generally, people graduate at the age of 21 and complete their masters at 24. Then an individual gets a job and need to get acquainted with the job culture, get some experience of how work is done. Earning money for 3 to 4 years will give them immense experience and learn to behave in corporate world. This will teach him about the life and how to earn for his living.
Getting married before 30 is perfect age because a person gets a time to spend with their spouse and after that they can have their kids. So, having a kid at the age 31 to 35 is better. When your kids group up and is about to get married at around 30 years of age, you will be at around 60 years. You will be getting a chance to enjoy your son/daughter’s wedding and if you are luckier you will get time to play with your grandchildren. At the later age health issues starts if not taken care and this can lead to miserable life. Let me give you an example of my best friend and his father. My friends’ father was 65 years and my friend was just 25. His father died, and he was just pursuing his university studies. The reason is due to the age gap.
So, to conclude, getting married before 30 is the best age for the individual and for the society to avoid the generation gap between father and son.
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| 2019-06-02 | jitenwaghela | 56 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31135531136 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47445590242 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520146520147 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.495258355 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2352941176 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 7.06120827912 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322895424631 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103219655749 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136016445028 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297266565177 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159076055941 0.056905535591 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 12.4159519038 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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