The money spent on space research has brought enormous benefits to mankind, but it could be more usefully applied. How far do you agree?
With the increasing development of space technology, human being now can travel further beyond the earth. it is argued by some people that the expenditure utilized for space research could be more practical if it was spent on fields of national economics such as agriculture, health care, so on. I strongly disagree with that opinion by 2 reasons demonstrated below.
First of all, the resources on the earth have been over exploiting significantly just over fews decades so it is urgent to find unprecedented source out of the earth which only is reached by space travel. It is certainly true that one day, there will be no more resources on the earth due to most of them are limited and unrecovered. For example, some scientists believes in few decades, human beings will have to confront with the shortage of food and fresh water. Famine will occur in many nations which leads to a huge chaos in society worldwide. Besides, running out of fossil fuel definitely affect to economy especially, some developed countries such as US, UK and so on. By exploring uncharted places in the universe, there may be novel resources found and that can compensate the rapidly diminishing of the world’s resources.
Secondly, space research can help mankind to find new planet to live. The population’s density is a serious problem. The world’s population has been increasing dramatically but livable land is not. It is necessary to invest money to space industry to discover habitat planet adapted to humans as soon as possible.Space aircraft can carry a part of population to immigrate to other planet as a result, the burden of overpopulation will be shrank.
In conclusion, people may not recognize the huge advantages of space research now but the benefits it will bring are undeniable for humans.It deserves to get more attention and support from governments, scientist, and civilian.
- The money spent on space research has brought enormous benefits to mankind but it could be more usefully applied How far do you agree 89
- Individuals can do nothing to change society Any new developments can only be brought about by governments and large institutions How far do you agree or disagree 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09967845659 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93678112355 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59807073955 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8412537943 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163943019861 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050019885334 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533833062551 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104320590849 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372843984147 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.