Leisure time usually refers to the free time children get mostly after their school, homework and sports practice is complete. Leisure time activities are as important as any other activities in children's lives. The way a child spends this time plays a great role in his/her individual growth and self improvement.
I do not believe that non-educational activities done during leisure time is a waste of that time. Education is the basis of knowledge in an individual's life but there are many other skills and activities that contribute to the development of a child's mind. A huge role is played by the things a child chooses to do during the free time given. In today's date, when there are so many career options and it is not necessary to be good at academics to be successful in life, it is very important that freedom to do what children like to do during their free time is given.
Some people believe that leisure time activities should be educational while some seem to disagree. In my opinion, whatever a child wants to do in the free time should be his/her individual choice as these activities help children identify their hobbies and interests. Leisure activities should not be categorized as educational or non-educational as long as they are helping in child's self improvement and boosting curiosity. Productivity is a factor that should be given more importance here as academic subjects are anyway studies by all students. However, adults must make sure that children are not getting involved in any bad habits or violence or any inappropriate activity that may hamper their positive growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ucation is the basis of knowledge in an individuals life but there are many other skills an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, however, if, may, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97407407407 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84550761381 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52962962963 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1402580611 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.916666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277427483561 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122950056453 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835257376355 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197126413637 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377776056434 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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