Some people prefer cold weather conditions while others don t Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Some people prefer cold weather conditions, while others don't. Discuss both views and give your own opinion/

There are people who love cold weather, snow, rain. Others love the sun and the warm weather and do not understand how to love the cold. But why can people love the cold weather? Some of my friends believe that their performance increases greatly when it rains or snows outside and vice versa, they are very relaxing when it is warm and sunny outside the window. On the other hand, in warm sunny weather there are much more chances to go for a walk and more activity outside the house. You can have a picnic, ride bicycles, roller skates, skateboards, swim in the pool or spend time on the beach. In cold weather, this kind of recreation is very small and if you do not like snowboarding or skiing, then winter is definitely not for you.

As for me, I really do not like winter and cold weather. A very hot summer for me is better than a cold winter or autumn. I prefer to wear light dresses, sweaters or jackets than sweaters, boots and warm winter jackets or fur coats. And the rain and snow on the street, while I walk on it, make me nervous.

They say that nature has no bad weather, and each person decides for himself in what kind of weather he feels more comfortable: in cold or warm

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, then, while, as for, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35267857143 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21777069506 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9095421381 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168447401042 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756724949028 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535130000436 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107870799594 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309560247231 0.056905535591 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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