Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment.
-Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some people argue that watching TV is helpful for studies while others say that it would be useful just for entertainment purpose. Although it is useful for utilizing our leisure time, I believe that it is more effective in education because it helps in brain development.
On the one hand, sitting more in the front of the TV screen would result in health related problems. The person who watches television other than for recreation and for more than couple of hours daily, has higher chances to get cardio and other major diseases like obesity and week eyesight. In recent research at the Harvard University, shows that most of the health diseases among people are due to spending more time on TV serials and programs. I personally believe that watching it effectively for specified time would not have any impact.
On the other hand, it develops brain and helps in enhancing skills in studies. The students who watch more study channels are good at problem solving skills and they are also better communication skills. Watching innovative and research programs would help to increase mental ability and would, therefore, result in higher marks in different courses. The survey conducted by The United States revils that students who watch Discovery channel regularly have better understanding of subjects and have more ways to solve a single problem. In my opinion, it is preferable to watch TV other than relaxing and enjoying because it helps to get better in academics.
In conclusion, While watching TV only for rejuvination is less useful, it is even more useful in developing our mind and perform better in education.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06296296296 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63657143205 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3920214799 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20712314349 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817981228385 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102717896848 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162343945602 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107016420878 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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