The widespread use of the internet has brought many problem. what do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web? what solution can you suggest ?
It is true that people all over the world mostly use the internet regulary. although there will undoubtedly be some negative conseqences, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
As the internet has become a part of daily life, several related problem can be anticipated. the main issue is that the internet constrains the brain from developing the ability to memorize data. people take the time to remember where the information can be found on the internet, rather than what the information was. another disadvatage to using the internet for all information is being misinformed. most websites do not contain a work cited with verifiable infomation. another potential danger is if one is not careful a virus can cause their entire computer to crash. it can also lead to identitfy theft, credit card and other crimes.
There several action that people can take to slove the problem described above. firstly, a simple solution would be to keep an effective anti-virus software program and keep that program updated . a second measure would be for parents to encaurage thier children to join extracurricular activity in order to decrease the time spent on the internet. finally, parent should help the children learn to use the internet properly and effectively. for examble, parents may help the children to locate approriate websites, point them in the direction of site that can help them with homework or that relate to their interest.
In colusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the use of the internet is increasingly popular.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14828897338 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74585420865 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.218513026 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223410129692 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074647930287 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453367728709 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140710074327 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472278578574 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.