You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
• say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing this in response to the arrangement that has made about sharing room. I actually feel comfort at first with the arrangement because I was able to have a new friend as I am a newcomer in this country, then I was also able to share my difficulties or anything related to my problems at college with my housemate. But, as time goes by, I feel uncomfortable with this situation. I feel like I couldn't be able to continue this sharing room. I had many problems that made me feel uncomfortable about this.
The problem I had during my stay at college room was I couldn't do my work properly. In addition, when I had to study during my exam, I was studying at dawn and I am afraid that it would interfere my housemate as I am quite louder in studying. Furthermore, the situation I didn't like the most is, my housemate was a dirty-type of person. Sometimes he littered which in my perspective, it was such an impolite thing. On the other hand, as a Moslem, I am certainly did my prayer 5 times a day, and I am again afraid that it would interfere my housemate when I have to do my Shubuh Prayer at dawn.
I have some suggestions for this accommodation problems. Perhaps, I have to live alone in my room as I am feeling uncomfortable based on the problems stated. I need you to help me to talk with my housemate that this arrangement couldn't be continued and yet I have to decide that if we live alone each other, we will feel better and not feel uncomfortable anymore. Thus, I hope you can answer to my letter as soon as possible and thank you in advance.
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| 2018-08-23 | shareefmujtaba | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: couldn't
...able with this situation. I feel like I couldnt be able to continue this sharing room. ...
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Suggestion: couldn't
...ad during my stay at college room was I couldnt do my work properly. In addition, when ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... studying. Furthermore, the situation I didnt like the most is, my housemate was a di...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...other hand, as a Moslem, I am certainly did my prayer 5 times a day, and I am again...
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Suggestion: couldn't
...with my housemate that this arrangement couldnt be continued and yet I have to decide t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, thus, i feel, in addition, i am afraid, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 24.0651302605 266% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3143812709 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78403938008 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488294314381 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9822743653 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203334276477 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830602234552 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055390393032 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154108363743 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766576997494 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.