Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern world as technology is getting more easier and fast with the advacement of science. Some people are inclined toward the attitute that internet has led this world to become interconnected with the globe information which creates the problem, whereas, other holds different perspective. No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of internet. I personally, though, belive that this scientists have made our life easy by introducing a facility like interne. It provides us a lot of essential information in one click. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons for support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that sometimes students of school and college requires to work to topics which are very arduous. In past it takes more efforts and expenses to buy books than spend time to find the specific part of information. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. When I was in school we did not have the internet and whenever our teacher gives any assignment we had to worked harder and spent our nights working on it to achieve success. Moreover, when I promoted in college and got to know the use of internet I was amazed by seeing such things. It saved our time and provides all the information on any topic we search. Thus, this experience taught me that internet is a blessing.
Secondly, some people are business minded and they do not know anything about the business. To explain broadly, on internet their is all treasures of information are available, its on us how we use it. To exemplify, my cousin he eagerly wanted to start the business within the limited saving, so he kept searching and came on the decision to start a food truck. Moreover, the overlay of this business plan worked that he took from the google and he is a successfull business man now. Therefore, internet is vital for all fields.
In the light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that if people do not misuse the internet. It holds a information of all over the world and it is our duty to use it wisely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...s modern world as technology is getting more easier and fast with the advacement of science...
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Line 1, column 414, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rnet. I personally, though, belive that this scientists have made our life easy by i...
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Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
...students of school and college requires to work to topics which are very arduous. In pa...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...siness. To explain broadly, on internet their is all treasures of information are ava...
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Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...le do not misuse the internet. It holds a information of all over the world and i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69866666667 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67593589028 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3620580783 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229502962545 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651194340277 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686114427409 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146696075687 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708665053947 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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