stydying abroad what will you or dislike and why
Studying or getting a good education is the right of every student and a necessity in one's life.There are differing opinions of students on studying abroad. Some students like the idea of studying abroad and feel very excited about it. However, other students do not feel the same they are against the idea of studying abroad. I most definitely believe that, I will love the experience of studying abroad.
Firstly, I would get a chance to live in a western developed country.I always wanted that since my childhood, it was always my dream to go and study engineering in the united states of america. It would also give me a chance to experience the western culture firsthand. I will get a chance to experience the life of a university which so many people dream about in our country.In addition, i will also get an oppurtunity to interact with people from all over the world
Furthermore, I feel i will really like learning experience. I am an electronic engineer and The best engineering schools in the world are in the United States Of America. I always had an affinity towards studying engineering and this will give me a chance to learn, gain knowledge and polish up my skills. I will also get a chance to do research, get a chance to use state of the art technologies available in american universities, which we do not have access in our country.For instance we never had access to laser cutting beams used in the manufacturing of processor for the design of a microprocessor for our system on chip design for an intelligent driver safety system in my college project.
Finally, I think that this experience will make me a better human being. In my country i live with my parents and i am dependent on them for almost most of things.However i believe that living alone will make me independent and responsible financially, emotionally and mentally . I would be responsible for my actions and i will have to bear the consequences of my mistakes which will teach me a great deal.Although, hand i would miss home and my family but this price is worth paying for what i am going to get in return.
In conclusion, In my opinion it would be an amazing and learning experience for me which i will most definitely love.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, really, so, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70918367347 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9174245854 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47193877551 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0334688336 48.9658058833 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.857142857 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118482431863 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514131766397 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394880548672 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696089307458 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279222280004 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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