TPO 45 independent writing taskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives Use s

Young generation have always been dependant on their parents for decision makings in some fields. However, nowadays, they are more capable of making choices on their own without adults intruding. There are several aspects which explains this statement.

To start, in the past, children usually had to take up the job of their ancestors. Therefore, practicing demanded skills to be ready had to start at a young age. They were usually taught by their parents or relatives which resulted in obeying them whenever necessary even if, that was not what they wanted to do. However, with development of technology and culture being altered, young people have a wider set of options and safer environment to be able to make choices and still survive on their own. Their affiliation is much less than it was before. Giving them the ability to dream big and be ambitious even if their parents does not approve.

As well as that, I strongly believe that teenagers and young adults were much more respectful toward their parent's demand in few generations back comparing to now. In a simpler way, they did not usually say "no" to them. On the other hand, this is not the case now.

Last but not least, one of the most important factors that cause this situations is that nowadays, people usually move out at age of 18 because of college, studying and work. Basically they learn how to survive alone and stand on their own. This has a cosiderable amount of affect on their self confidence and stability in making up their minds about open options in front of them.

In conclusion, young generation nowadays tend to find it easier to make decisions on their own and to rely less on their parents. This has been a result of multiple factors such as having a different culture, wider range of options comparing to the past.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, as well as that, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82484076433 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50537375314 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0533649332 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1176470588 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331991405447 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101932465129 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823504084215 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189191596506 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625678232264 0.0645574589148 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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