Having more time to be involved in a job and embracing the creative and interesting things in a job can be considered important, for many people. Nevertheless, I think this can depend on many factors, for example, somebody wanting a balanced life might have different needs and priorities compared to a person who intends to start a job in a new company. Generally speaking, I believe that it is better for all concerned if employees have a job with more vacation, particularly if they face the job with creativity or other factors.
First and foremost, it's important to consider health. Certainly, some people can have a spellbinding situation of their health, however, these days, there are a lot of problems that impact our health due to long work. By the way of example, I can recall trying to keep healthy as an intern in a big architecture company that always calls its people to struggle with a plan of some public building projects until weekends and often cut off our vacation to do more work. It in turn had adverse effects for things of my study performance.
In addition to the importance of health, I think this is better for employees' study potential. Of course, for some people in some environments, an interesting and challenging job can be a good guide to have more chances to learn, however, I think it would be fair to say that ( for most people ) you are more likely to have more time to study whatever you like, and have a chance to improve your work abilities during your spare time. I can recall a friend of mine in another architecture company that has more vacation for its people so that he can learn more about the software skill related to digital modeling for a building or a structure that he became more skilled than other people in other companies.
Finally, having a job with more vacation doesn't mean that employees cannot keep effective. I'll be the first to admit that many people just focus on their job during their work time and don't have more responsibility for their job during vacation. Despite this possibility, even though I enjoy a good vacation in my new company, I don't forget to improve my abilities to deal with the problems in my work and exploit my time to enhance my work skills. So I don't think it is necessarily fair to claim that, just because a person has more vacation, he or she is somehow unable to enjoy benefits from the effectiveness.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I think that in most cases it's more beneficial for most employees to get more vacation in a job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er, I think it would be fair to say that for most people you are more likely to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld be fair to say that for most people you are more likely to have more time to...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...inally, having a job with more vacation doesnt mean that employees cannot keep effecti...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...n that employees cannot keep effective. Ill be the first to admit that many people ...
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Suggestion: don't
...on their job during their work time and dont have more responsibility for their job ...
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Suggestion: don't
...oy a good vacation in my new company, I dont forget to improve my abilities to deal ...
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Suggestion: don't
...my time to enhance my work skills. So I dont think it is necessarily fair to claim t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, i think, in addition, of course, by the way, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64537444934 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6919660994 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464757709251 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.4634274923 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.6 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2666666667 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242627651701 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899994727957 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814569813145 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145777330123 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430431916954 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.