Genetically modified trees

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Genetically modified trees

Both the reading and the listening sections discuss the pros and cons of genetically modified trees. The author of the reading passage points out that planting genetically modified trees will be more beneficial because that kind of trees will grow faster, produce more fruit and withstand adverse conditions. The lecturer, however, challenges the claims made by the author .She is of the opinion that sure there are some benefits of planting genetically modified trees but when we examine the subject closely there are some serious problems and cost associated with using genetically modified trees.

Firstly the author argues that genetically modified trees are much more resistant than natural trees so they are more like to survive in hash conditions. The listening section by contrast mentions that genetically modified trees maybe appear more resistant but they are not necessarily survival. More specifically she claims that natural trees are genetically diverse so there are also some individual resistant trees . She expands on the topic by mentioning that even if most of one kind of tree are killed those few resistant ones will survive and ensure the survival of that kind of tree , but genetically modified trees are genetically much more uniform so if they exposed to environmental challenges they have not been designed for they all will die , so if the climate changes or a new pest invades the area they all will likely to wiped out.

Secondly, the text suggests that farmers reap more benefits by planting genetically modified trees because they grow faster and give greater products than unmodified trees do. The lecturer, by contrast rebuts this argument by mentioning that company that genetically modifies the tree tends to sell modified seeds more expansive than unmodified ones . In addition to this professor notes that farmer cannot just collect seed and than plant them, every time by planting genetically modified tree farmer have to pay to the company.

Finally , the reading passage points out that genetically modified trees can prevent overutilization of wild trees because they grow fast and would satisfy the demand for wood in those areas and save many of native trees . The lecturer , rebuts this by mentioning that genetically modified trees often grow more aggressively than natural trees do . Additionally she claims that genetically modified trees are typically plant among the natural trees and usually as a result they outcompete the native threes for resources such as sunlight , soil nutrients or water.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2145.0 1373.03311258 156% => OK
No of words: 404.0 270.72406181 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30940594059 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66328857162 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465346534653 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 419.366225166 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.5363076655 49.2860985944 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.0 110.228320801 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0769230769 21.698381199 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06452816374 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 77.0 4.19205298013 1837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.624574307495 0.272083759551 230% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.334593680236 0.0996497079465 336% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569583793604 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.475326055836 0.162205337803 293% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041508854592 0.0443174109184 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.3589403974 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 53.8541721854 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.0289183223 151% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.2367328918 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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