Essay topics:
shopping at the weekend
I like shopping. My work has a lot of stressful and shopping help me relax my mind. I usually go shopping at the weekend because on the weekday I have to work. I often shop for clothes, housewares, food. On Sunday i always buy food for a week. Of course, how many things I buy depending on how much money I have. some time i just window shopping. I want to shop alone. I want to have my own time to relax and don't care about anything.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...or a week. Of course, how many things I buy depending on how much money I have. som...
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Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...buy depending on how much money I have. some time i just window shopping. I want to ...
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Line 1, column 410, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...I want to have my own time to relax and dont care about anything.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 10.4613686534 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 12.0772626932 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 30.3222958057 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 348.0 1373.03311258 25% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 87.0 270.72406181 32% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0 5.08290768461 79% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.05407580998 4.04702891845 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34398226818 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 57.0 145.348785872 39% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.540411800872 121% => OK
syllable_count: 113.4 419.366225166 27% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 9.0 21.2450331126 42% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.6074420214 49.2860985944 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 38.6666666667 110.228320801 35% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.66666666667 21.698381199 45% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 7.06452816374 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254066350953 0.272083759551 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979975071234 0.0996497079465 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142914541879 0.0662205650399 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254066350953 0.162205337803 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 2.2 13.3589403974 16% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.72 53.8541721854 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 11.0289183223 30% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.44 12.2367328918 36% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.08 8.42419426049 72% => OK
difficult_words: 11.0 63.6247240618 17% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 10.7273730684 33% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.498013245 53% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 11.2008830022 36% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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